point of veiw

This is my writing task from last week

Animation scritp

Hi my name is latisha I will be showing you my animation. This term we are learning about move ya’ body and the objects we need so that we can move our bodys are sleeping and exercise and eating healthy food and drinking water and and Vegetables and healthy sandwich. Thank You for watching

This is my animation script .

photo wk6 point of veiw

sheep point of veiw

When the i was going to pick the lamb the i saw a lot of trees of course, while i was walking thru the trees i saw miss west if i had never seen a person in my life then i would have said “what is that hideous thing” then i saw another tree i bet my lamb was hiding behind the last tree that miss west recorded.So when the i went near my lamb my little lamb came out of its hiding spot because it thought that miss west would try and take it away to shave its wool off but instead miss west was just recording it.

Sheep Dictation

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her past as she realise other people touching distance of her lamb. she let out the loud lope lete wich echoed across padet. The sleeping lamb lifted it head and turn to words us. befor from slowly return As the sheep got closer and closer I thought about whether I should turn and run, I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.”

Narrtive peephole

Once upon a time there was ten students walking in a line to Mrs lugtupui to work on there animation. but there was five aliens walking towards them and then the ten students ran to Mrs lugtupi and there was more aliens there was seven aliens on the computer and they looked and the ten students then they went back to class but there was no won there so they went and looked in the library but there was only rubbish and then and all 12 aliens come pairing Then all of the ten kids ran around the school and they yelled for help but more aliens came back. today I peed up with tori.

Narrative writing plan

This is my writing plan.

wirting plan

Narrative wirtting

Start writing here: once a upon a time there was a beautiful girl named samona and she went for a great walk to the park. She wanted friends but no one was at the park with her. She walked again and then all of sudden this girls said hey do you want to play with us she was so excited. So she said yes please so she had a great time playing netball with the girls. The girls introduced them and said Hi my name is samona and the girls said lets play volleyball.





To be continued

Writing plan

This is my writing plan.

team 5 block time

Hi my name is latisha and after morning tea room nine maths class went to the team 5 block and we were seeing there project that they made in a little.we had to be in groups my leader was jozlo and my group was tori nature and patience and me. The first project we check





It was a cup project if we got the ball in the cup we get a point each i got it in once and I got a point.


This is My time in the team 5 block please leave a comment by latisha

animation script

Hi my name is Latisha this year team 4 are learning about force and flight my animation is about teens i will be showing you what is force and flight all about lift makes it go high and The Thrust makes it go forward and then the weight makes it go down and the drag makes it go backwards thanks for watching bye please leave a comment .



This is my animation script.

skydiving

In the long hollydays me and my family went skydiving. when I got in the plane i felt nervous and I had butterflies in my tummy .It felt like I was going to fall when i first got out of the airplane but then i kept on flying on and on. But then I slide down the mountain and by back was sore and there was fire at the end and i almost went in it but then my family saved me .


This is my writing about skydiving. please leave a comment.

Fia Fia fecount 2018

Recount

WALT: recount a moment in time.

WALT: structure our writing into paragraphs.

Your task

Write about the moment you waited at the side of the stage ready to perform for Fia Fia and then your performance on the stage. What did you do? How did you feel? What did you see while you waited at the side of the stage? What did you see while you were on the stage?

PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the key words to your plan.  Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.

Who? Pt england kids


What? It was fia fia


Where? At pt england school at the back feild


When? On thursday 12 of April on the last day of term one



BODY: Describe what happened.



Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)



What happened while you waited at the side of the stage, ready to go on? The kapa haka group were on





How did you feel while you waited at the side of the stage? I was scared and Nervous





What did you see and hear while you were on the stage? I saw lots of people and they were Screaming



Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)



What happened while you were on the stage? I was smiling and doing some Actionsa Douglas





How did you feel while you were on the





Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?




stage?





What did you see and hear while you were on the stage?



Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)



What happened once you had left the stage? I was proud of myself





How did you feel after you had left the stage? I actually I was happy





What did you see and hear after you left the stage? Everyone say yay



Conclusion (Summary)



How did you feel after performing at Fia Fia? A little happy





Would you want to do it again? yes






Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:



















I know I have been successful writing because my recount:



1


Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.






2


Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.






3


Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.






4


Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).






5


Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.









Finished?


Get feedback from a buddy.


Create a drawing/image or add a photo (Check the Media link on our site).


Share your writing and image on your blog:


Title


Labels: 2018, Writing, Recount, Fia Fia 2018, Ako3


Add the link to your blog to our class Blog Log.

airplane

This is my airplane  writing by latisha

Ball experimet

On Monday morning Mrs Moala and Miss west decided to do a ball experiment with 2 different size of balls. Then They got a ball each and Mrs moala had a small ball and Miss west had a big ball.






Miss west stood on a chair and Mrs Moala they both held there balls.Next they held the balls at the same time. They held them at the same height. After that they held the balls tight and they dropped it and Mrs moala’s ball cracked and Miss west ball’s bounce.
This is my ball experiment.

Choose it Narrative

Choose It Narrative




Today you will be writing a narrative. In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing. You must use ONE picture.




When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.




Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end. It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.








Image Attributions:


Bristol Balloon Fiesta 2009, By mattbuck (category) [CC BY-SA 2.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0) or CC BY-SA 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0)], from Wikimedia Commons


By Rapportere [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/)], via pxhere.


Jetlev Jetpack, By Seg9585 [CC BY 3.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/3.0)], via Wikimedia Commons


Aircraft, by WikiImages [CC0 Public Domain (https://creativecommons.org/publicdomain/zero/1.0/deed.en)], via pixabay.










Begin Writing Here: On a sunny day there was a girl called mele and she was in a airplane and flying it on top of the sky tower . she was doing loops and go round and round and suddenly the air plane crashed in to the sky tower. After that she got out of the airplane and then it went flying by it self. she was looking at it and it was going a bit crazy.The next day she went out and testing it and it was broken then she fixed it with her dad. she tried it again and it was working and she a her and dad were happy she enjoyed her airplane ride.

scientific Question

This is my writing  about the Mrs moala and Mrs west is doing a expiration.

forces and flight

my animation is about hitting a tennis ball.

animaton

This is my animation about tennis at the courts.