Fia Fia fecount 2018

Recount

WALT: recount a moment in time.

WALT: structure our writing into paragraphs.

Your task

Write about the moment you waited at the side of the stage ready to perform for Fia Fia and then your performance on the stage. What did you do? How did you feel? What did you see while you waited at the side of the stage? What did you see while you were on the stage?

PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the key words to your plan.  Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.

Who? Pt england kids


What? It was fia fia


Where? At pt england school at the back feild


When? On thursday 12 of April on the last day of term one



BODY: Describe what happened.



Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)



What happened while you waited at the side of the stage, ready to go on? The kapa haka group were on





How did you feel while you waited at the side of the stage? I was scared and Nervous





What did you see and hear while you were on the stage? I saw lots of people and they were Screaming



Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)



What happened while you were on the stage? I was smiling and doing some Actionsa Douglas





How did you feel while you were on the





Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?




stage?





What did you see and hear while you were on the stage?



Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)



What happened once you had left the stage? I was proud of myself





How did you feel after you had left the stage? I actually I was happy





What did you see and hear after you left the stage? Everyone say yay



Conclusion (Summary)



How did you feel after performing at Fia Fia? A little happy





Would you want to do it again? yes






Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:



















I know I have been successful writing because my recount:



1


Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.






2


Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.






3


Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.






4


Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).






5


Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.









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