I am a Year 8 learner in Room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Mrs Ilaoa.
Tuesday, 28 August 2018
Sheep Dictation
The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her past as she realise other people touching distance of her lamb. she let out the loud lope lete wich echoed across padet. The sleeping lamb lifted it head and turn to words us. befor from slowly return As the sheep got closer and closer I thought about whether I should turn and run, I began to panic, “Was she going to attack me?” Holding my breath, I froze. I sighed as the sheep dodged me and ran protectively towards it’s lamb. “Phew, that was a close call.”
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