writing NARRATIVE

Keyhole Narrative

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas

Using the picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing.

Start writing here: One day there were three little kids their names were Bella Zyla, Victoria , and there was a old lady and a old man. The old man and the  old lady went to there house in the backyard and they saw the three little kids in their backyard then the three kids ran into a old crusty van and drove off up to space in but  then the old people went and followed the three kids.then the old man were looking everywhere. where are they the old lady and old man they climbed over the crusty dusty old bridge suddenly the old crusty dusty bridge. Then the three kids went quietly back in to the crusty  van and Zyla drove back home and they stayed in the van. For like about 30 to ten minutes then they woke up also they were in there favourite place it was back at tonga but suddenly there was a humagis big noise and it was a huge cute baby he told me  his name and it was baby. Then i was thinking is that his name or not then i  fell on the ground and went to sleep then arrived at the zoo no no no this is not our home they said  on what are we going to do Zyla look at victoria and said what are we going to do she said i no let’s make a card that say can you please help us we are at the zoo we are trying to get back home but when we all was wake up we arrive somewhere else ! please help us thank you.