Trip to stardom

Recount Writing with Paragraphs -
Our Stardome Trip

We will talk about how we are going to craft this recount together.

Our Moon is Special

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You need to write four paragraphs about your trip to the Stardome. They need to have a
topic sentence,
three details,

and a concluding sentence.

Remember! This is a recount - you need to describe what happened on your trip in order.

What did you do, see, and learn during each part of your trip?

To help you, there are some topic sentences to start off each paragraph.

Start writing here:

Yesterday, all the Year 3s and Year 4s got on a bus to go to the Stardome. Yesterday we went to stardom we went on the bus to   Stardom some kids went to sleep and the rest of the kids were singing on the way to stardom.

At the Stardome, we learned some really cool things about our solar system.  At stardom we went into this room were all of the plantes.there was Earth. Is where people can live and the sun is a star.

When we weren’t in the Stardome, we were having fun outside. After we watched the movie we went outside to play I played on the flying fox and fell off it and then I went to the cho cho cho cho cho Train.

After all this, we headed back to Point England School. After we played outside we we back to school on the bus and then we had lunch.

After you are finished and have proofread, have this checked by Mr Moran, Mrs Moala, or Mr H, and post this to your blog.

There are many moons in the solar system, but none are like Earth’s. Mars has two tiny moons, called Phobos and Deimos. Jupiter has 67 moons, and they’re all different shapes, colours, and sizes. Saturn has 62 moons, and dozens more tiny moonlets amongst its golden rings. But on Earth, we have just one and we simply call it the Moon.